Warning: Fanfiction ahead
Mar. 4th, 2006 06:29 amSo I got through the scene that was making me hesitate on "Another Man's Son". Now my challenge is to show passage of time by presenting things in an episodic manner while keeping it interesting. Nobody needs or wants to read about ever fireguard Char and Garma pull, (and Garma's insistence that he be treated like everyone else has just scored him and Char fireguard every night for a week) or every class, or every FTX, etc. So I have to be very selective while keeping things moving.
I'm falling into my habit of background characters going nameless, which is what I always end up going back and fixing later. So if you want to name Char's and Garma's training cadre (and if anyone knows what such people are called at any of the US military academies or in Canada, tell me, because I know they are NOT drill sergeants) tell me please. I probably won't use the term per se, but adapt it. "Cadre" is clumsy to use.
Running time now, then off to Orange County to kill Tony.
I'm falling into my habit of background characters going nameless, which is what I always end up going back and fixing later. So if you want to name Char's and Garma's training cadre (and if anyone knows what such people are called at any of the US military academies or in Canada, tell me, because I know they are NOT drill sergeants) tell me please. I probably won't use the term per se, but adapt it. "Cadre" is clumsy to use.
Running time now, then off to Orange County to kill Tony.